Not bad. It's a little quirky, yet fun to listen to :)
Not bad. It's a little quirky, yet fun to listen to :)
Thanks, I am going to upload a new version soon :) Well... I think this or the next week to be honest
Pretty good! The vocals are off tune a little and they need more variety, also the melody needs more background instruments. MY TIP: try to match the vocal melody with the song melody, and try to add sub melodies to add more emotion, it will help immensely :)
Thanks for your feedback, I'll keep that in mind for future songs! :D
The main melody is barely audible compared to the sound effects and the melody started off very late.
And where's the drums???
But it's very well done :)
Thanks, that's kinda what I was shooting for, it was an experiment in seeing how far I could draw out build up and then spring the melody at an unexpected point.
Not bad. The song is out of tune but it has a catchy melody. My tip: try varying the melodies, when a song gets too repetitive, listeners will tune out and also, try quantizing the song, it'll sound much better:)
Lovely :)
You can't make music? Dude, this is way better than my songs will ever be :'v
Aeronautics Adventure
Age 23
Music
Joined on 4/22/17